1. I need to focus my argument regarding videogames and pedagogy to address specifically the importance of perspective and subjectivity in relation to our pedagogical institutions, and the effects this process has on how we view digital media.
2. I need to reshape my body paragraphs to emphasize the specific concept I would like to address, instead of confusing the reader with multiple arguments and/or questions.
3. I need to improve my transitions, so that readers observe a logical sequence of ideas in the paper.
4. I need to reexamine the subject I am discussing in order to develop a new conclusion paragraph that critically responds to my new subject of discourse.
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