Week 7: In class

My paper is in the drafting stage at the moment.  I have decided upon a research thesis and developed supporting evidence, but I am still in the process of clarifying and focusing my argument into one cohesive entity.  I am aware of the structure I would like to use for my topic, but unsure as to how my audience will receive my idea.  I would like feedback to help me understand how my audience reacts to the rhetorical structure of my argument, and whether or not there is an alternative structure that may improve the reception of my idea.